I have completed issue 6 of Dasher. However, before I could publish it onto kindle, I need to fix a few mistakes from my previous two issues.
Issue 2 was about 34 pages long, but my intention was to make it 32 pages long. I have taken out 2 pages that I don't think were needed for the story. Plus, at the end of issue 2, I did some experimenting with Dasher's speech bubbles to see how it would look if the outlines were white and the inside was blue. After doing some checking, I quickly realized that these speech bubbles weren't right for the story, because it had made the text barely visible for the readers to read.. So I made sure to correct the speech bubbles to make the text stand out.
I had comments about the front cover of issue 2 that it should have Dasher on instead of a giant helmet changing colour. Based on the comments, I have looked into the cover and decided on changing the design to make it more eye catching.
On the bottom is my original design, and on the top is the new and improved design of the front cover. Instead of changing the colour of the helmet, I have thought about showing the main hero changing from a normal kid into a superhero to reflect on the story as well as the title transformation.
After I have changed the front cover of issue 2, I had to re-upload it onto the back page of issue 1.
These fixes were needed to better advertise the next issue for the readers. I have completed the changes and I am still trying to find the right opportunity to publish issues 1 and 2 again on kindle.
In the synopsis page of issue 1, there was a misspelling on one of the words. So I corrected the spelling and published issue 1 on kindle without regard to the changes that I needed to do in the first place. I am going to wait 72 hours to see if I will get the chance to publish issue 1 again with the changes I have made.
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